As you get ready for the looming 3DNC weekend, here is very good writing advice from two good prose stylists.
In this article, Stephen King gives “22 Lessons On How To Be A Great Writer.” I especially like 6-8, and I love the schedule he has developed for writing a novel. 3 months to draft; 6 weeks off; and as long as it takes to rewrite. The best piece of advice is “22. Stay married, be healthy, and live a good life.” But that’s not just advice for writers; that’s advice for everybody. And if you’re not married, put in “choose healthy, inspiring friends.”
In “Politics and the English Language,” George Orwell talks mostly about having a good prose style. His advice is all super practical. Towards the end, he has this handy list:
- Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
- Never use a long word where a short one will do.
- If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
- Never use the passive where you can use the active.
- Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
- Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
I am going to try to keep these all in mind as I draft and later revise Ready-Made Grave. I hope you they are helpful to you in your drafting, too.